you're a good artist
just a couple of suggestions (you really don't have to listen to them)
1.) Try another genre (dress-up games get a bad reputation for nudity and perversion, which this doesn't have)I'm sure with your drawing capabilities, you could make something grand.
2.) music is important (any ol' song will do) cos' silence is well, silent
3.) um, yeah, that's about it. Again, love your artwork, and hoping to see something of yours in the future ;)